Monday, January 5, 2009

ग़ज़ल-३

ग़ज़ल-3

चाँद शरमाए अगर देखे तेरी तनवीर* को,
आईना क्या मुंह बताएगा तेरी तसवीर को।



पे-ब-पे* अज़्मो-अमल नाकाम होते ही रहे,
मेने इस पर भी न छोड़ा दामने तदबीर# को।


रंज में, ग़म में, अलम में*  मुझको हँसता देखकर,
बारहा# रोना पड़ा है गर्दिशे तक्दीर को।



वो ही देते है मेरे शेअरो की कीमत हाशमी,
जानते है जो मेरी तेहरीर को तकरीर को।


*चमक, रौशनी
*लगातार
#कौशिश
*दुखो की कष्टप्रद स्थिति
#अक्सर

म् हाशमी।

20 comments:

"अर्श" said...

बहोत खूब लिखा है आपने ढेरो बधाई स्वीकारें.....

Vinay said...

हाशमी जी आपकी ग़ज़ल तो आला है, वाह साहब वाह।

---यदि समय हो तो पधारें---
चाँद, बादल और शाम पर आपका स्वागत है|

Ashutosh said...

bahut accha likha hai aapne,aap ki kavita dil ko chooh gayi.

Udan Tashtari said...

वाह वाह!! बहुत उम्दा!!!

Ashutosh said...

aap ne bahut sundar gajal likha hai,aap aisi hi sundar gajal likhte rahe,aisi meri subhkamna hai,aap kabhi mere blog ke follower baniye,aap ka swagat hai.
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बवाल said...

बेहतरीन ग़ज़ल पढ़ी चचा साहब !
बारहा रोना पड़ा है गर्दिशे तक्दीर को
क्या बात है !

अवाम said...

बहुत ही सुंदर और खुबसूरत ग़ज़ल है आपकी. नव वर्ष की शुभकामनायें. नया साल आपको शुभ हो, मंगलमय हो सर

Ahmad Ali Barqi Azmi said...

मंसूर हाशमी की ग़ज़लोँ मे ताज़गी है
तर्ज़ेअमल मेँ उनके एक हुसने ज़िंदगी है

हालाते हाज़ेरा पर हैँ तबसरा यह ग़ज़लेँ
अशआर से नुमायाँ रेजो अलम, ख़ुशी है

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नीरज गोस्वामी said...

रंज में,ग़म में, अलम में मुझको हँसता देखकर,
बारहा रोना पड़ा है गर्दिशे तक्दीर को।
बेहतरीन शेर और बेहद उम्दा ग़ज़ल...सुभानाल्लाह मंसूर साहेब...जिंदाबाद...
नीरज

अभिषेक मिश्र said...

अच्छी लगी गजल आपकी. स्वागत.

(gandhivichar.blogspot.com)

Anonymous said...

wah ji
aap bhi laaye gazal me

वो ही देते है मैरे शेअरो की कीमत हाशमी,
जानते है जो मैरी तेहरीर को तकरीर को।

shares ko
magar is gazal ko sunaayenge kab?

विक्रांत बेशर्मा said...

बहुत ही शानदार ग़ज़ल है ,ये शेर खास तौर से पसंद आया

चाँद शरमाए अगर देखे तैरी तनवीर* को,
आईना क्या मुंह बताएगा तैरी तसवीर को।

Shambhu Choudhary said...

कवि मंच पर आपका स्वागत है। अपनी रचनाएँ हमें भी भेजे।

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